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What Makes You Different?

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"Happy. I love you!"
She heard those words every morning.
He wasn't the only one.
She had every man on the island at her feet.
What made him different?:
She loved him, too.

"Why the native boy?" asked her parents.
"He's different." She would say.
"He's dangerous." They would argue.
"Every man is dangerous." She would end the conversation.

"But I love you, too." Denny pleaded.
"Lanna loves you, Denny. I don't." She reasoned.

"I thought we could be together..." Elliot cried.
"What would Julia think?" She said, and walked away.

"Our combined cooking powers could have enslaved the world!!!" Pierre screamed.
"Pierre, don't be such a nut." She punched his shoulder. "Natalie's my best friend."

"Hmph." Vaughan sighed.
"Sabrina needs you." She looked...remorseful.

Mark. She'd forgotten about him.
"Good thing we're just friends." He said.
They fist-pounded.

"You are...special." Shea said.
She laid her head on his shoulder.
"Maybe too special, I think." She replied.
"No. Never." He kissed her head.
Thought I'd take a different approach to writing a Harvest Moon fanfic. I don't know, I like this style. I'm certainly better at this than straight up story-writing, but I'm still not a good writer.

I never really thought about this before, but I really did have every bachelor at a high heart level except for Mark (because I suck at festivals). Well, Vaughn was still a blue heart, but still. Every one else had a red heart.

Why did I really pick Shea? Same reasons as Chelsea did. He's different. He's not a stock Harvest Moon personality.

*crap, I spelled Vaughn's name wrong. I guess the super-proper me kicked in and was like, "It needs another 'A'!!" *so much facepalm*
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aorinappollo's avatar
This one's short and simple, but I really love it!
Chelsea's character here is kind of cool; she doesn't take the man of her friends, and is considerate of their feelings! :D
I honestly found Pierre's part hilarious, maybe it's because of his statement. :XD:
Shea's my favorite bachelor, but there aren't that much fics of him, so I was happy when I came across this one! :heart: